Update.. So I was thinking that each spot could be the name of one of the vitamins that is in milk ( there are 9). So I would design a little machine where they would pay and instead of "Pump 3" they would be "Pump Protein" or something...
I added an image to see if they spots were sitting flat. The text is just something I want to incorporate in the design, it is not really going to be in that spot. Also I just thought of an idea to make the cord look like a cows tail.....
I like where this is headed. There are a few things I think you need to do:
ReplyDelete1. I need to see an aerial view (from above) - I don't think you're thinking about the relationship between the spots enough.
2. I think the scale is off. It looks huge in relation to the cows. The cows are essentially the size of a car. Are you imagining the car would drive up onto the Spot? If so, you need to show that.
3. Look at Avery's blog (you can access through the Class blog) and see how she's showing the side view and the aerial view (she has some scale issues too, but I think it will give you a good idea.
4. It's fine that you want to comp it all together, but I also want you to focus on the design of the OBJECT and I think that putting it into the environment is making you less focused on that. So, take it back out, look at the shapes and the colors.